Friday 14 October 2016

Writing

In room 9 we are learning how to make a character portraits. We have to describe the physical features of our character. Thi is mine.

As he looks over the hill towards the marching army, the seventeen year old general gets nervous.Brown hair and ponytail blowing in the wind, while his sharp hazelnut brown eyes scout the area around him. This young man is made for war. Strong and fit. Even  scarred by a tiger which he fought to death. He hears the horn sound. It's time for war. As he sits up straight in his saddle. His face still young, and his sense of smell still fresh. He smells like greasy mutton and bread. The smell common in the tribes. This could be his last time on a horse.

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